Tips for Writing Effective Cold Emails for E-commerce Outreach

Hey everyone, So I built a tool for helping mostly marketers automate repetitive design work. Maybe marketers at agencies that have to make a lot of variations of the same design or something. So I'm working on doing cold email outreach for my first customers but things aren't working out so well. so I decided to do more research on writing better cold emails and if I'm even reaching out to the right people. After my research, this is the cold email, I came up with. This exact template is for e-commerce managers or coordinator, though it can still be used for my other targets with just a bit of changes here and there. So I'm asking if this is a good email Hey {{name}}, Quick question about {{company}}'s sale campaigns – When you launch promotions, are you manually creating promo images for each product? Most e-comm teams spend 15-20 hours per campaign doing this (editing SKUs one by one in Canva). I built Rendria to automate it: design one template, auto-generate hundreds of product variations in ~10 minutes. If that sounds relevant, happy to show you how it works? Best, Chiagozie If they are any issues or a better way to write it, would more than appreciate the feedback