Seeking Tips for Writing Cold Emails and Crafting Offers

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i need help writing cold emails and crafting a compelling offer. can anyone help? i'm not getting replies - i’ve tried almost everything.

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Jared R.
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the copy is a bit salesy and not connecting
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Chris C.
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Definitely an opportunity to reword them - also worth checking deliverability, hit me up if you want to chat
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Nimesh
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You might need to do some research on the personas and draft different copies based on the persona, their challenges and how your services could solve it.
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Rebecca A.
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Hey Ketan S., I can help. You got good open rate but the messages are too Salesy. It's best to always start your outreach with a a lead magnet message and offer value first, naturally, they'd be inclined to want more.
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Sandra R.
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Hope this helps: https://revgenius.slack.com/archives/C014UCYGEQL/p1751973532617999?thread_ts=1751870870.026369&channel=C014UCYGEQL&message_ts=1751973532.617999

Jared R.
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the copy is a bit salesy and not connecting
❤️1
Chris C.
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Definitely an opportunity to reword them - also worth checking deliverability, hit me up if you want to chat
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Nimesh
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You might need to do some research on the personas and draft different copies based on the persona, their challenges and how your services could solve it.
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Rebecca A.
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Hey Ketan S., I can help. You got good open rate but the messages are too Salesy. It's best to always start your outreach with a a lead magnet message and offer value first, naturally, they'd be inclined to want more.
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Sandra R.
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Hope this helps: https://revgenius.slack.com/archives/C014UCYGEQL/p1751973532617999?thread_ts=1751870870.026369&channel=C014UCYGEQL&message_ts=1751973532.617999